The reality quotient of the story – With aspirations soaring high
in modern India, and numerous regulatory issues, more and more people feel
the pressures of long-distance relationships. Why does it have to be a choice
between aspirations and relations? The
word NRI comes with a lot of complexities, as opposed to the glamour still
associated with it in our society. In urban India, it has become increasingly
common for people to work and reside in a different country, with their loved
ones back home. Such a story, then, mirrors the exhausting trials of simply being
able to see those important people in life.
Excerpt –
“Shail, I do believe things would be different, if I was there, right next to you. Please understand, we have been patient all along, don’t give up now!”, muttered Pooja in a desperate attempt to reclaim what she soon seemed to be losing.
“Shail, I do believe things would be different, if I was there, right next to you. Please understand, we have been patient all along, don’t give up now!”, muttered Pooja in a desperate attempt to reclaim what she soon seemed to be losing.
But, Shailendra was so bogged down by the numerous failed attempts
to put a stop to these fights they would have. Arguments over not making enough
time for each other, the frustration of physically not being there for each
other. It was never going to be a bed of roses, but it had now become almost
impossible to pick out the thorns without pricking each other’s hearts.
Yet, Pooja exclaimed, “Please, I have to see you once!”. “What do
you expect me to do, hitchhike on a ship? I cannot, I simply cannot come back
right now, and I don’t have the strength to wait for the day I can”, screamed
Shailendra.
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Endnote: This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal andHarperCollins India.
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